“Good morning” smilingly went to her
She was not known to me ad completely stranger
I was daily traveling as railway passenger
She too was always with me as co-traveler
We were not at all exchanging words
Not even looking at each other
Only waiting for destination to alight
Rush towards work place in right time
Sometimes she used to be early in compartment
I too was rushing in at any moment
This made us to feel for each other
I developed some feeling and smiled at her
She responded well with gesture
We saw some reason behind it for sure
We were daily together for some hours
This gave me an opportunity to come closer
Red rose is love symbol for desire
She was moved with my address to her
It brought us together at first sight
At no stage I had felt it with delight
nice poem Nathan Luke1 minute ago I dont like the last line seems forced Comment 0 a chance encounter on a commuter train,
Chris Nelson2 minutes ago rhyming could be better.
“Good morning” smilingly went to her She was not known to me ad completely stranger
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Rohani Daud likes this. Rohani Daud Lovely poem.. a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1