Tuesday, February 14, 2017

Good To Greed Comments

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He wanted to study, but he was forced to work,
He had to earn for his family, this, he could not shirk.
He used to work hard and bore his family's load,
He spent many nights, on the bench by the road.
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Jasmeher Kathuria
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Jazib Kamalvi 26 December 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Jasmeher. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Ramesh Rai 16 April 2017

Another beautiful emotional write. Thanks for sharing.

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Chinedu Dike 14 February 2017

Beautiful rendition of words. An insightful narrative poem, well articulated and elegantly brought forth in good rhyme scheme with conviction. Thanks for sharing Jasmeher and welcome to Poemhunter.

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Jasmeher Kathuria 15 February 2017

Than you!

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