Goodbye Poem by live to die

Goodbye

Rating: 5.0


Goodbye everyone
I see no point in living
anymore whats the
point if your just killing
yourself or if your dieing
inside like me I've been
killing myself if I never did that
I would live longer then what
I would if I never did that
I'm dieing inside depression
is leading me down the path of death
Death will be my last decision
when I see no one cares
when I see you cry it makes me
want to end this pain I feel
why is I feel pain from others
why should I care about anyone else
when no one cares about me
if I ended this mistake
known as me
don't want to see the suffering
of the others I care about
I don't want to see you
so I don't feel your pain
so I say my last goodbye

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Arabian Heart 23 June 2008

i have nothing to say but one thing... I care

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Tyease Collins 22 June 2008

Deep just dnt plan on doing it...u have me to talk to now... nice poem though...beautiful

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Chaotic Life - Curly M. 13 January 2008

dont worry I care for u, I care for everyone please dont commit suicide, it'll be really sad

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jazmine kristen 29 November 2007

its a good one but sucide is not the answer trust me i been there

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