Goodbye Drug Poem by shane rose

Goodbye Drug



Goodbye drug
You've ruined my life
Never return
You stole my wife

We were in love
But you took over
Push came to shove
When I was not sober

You've left me with nothing
Not even a cent
You can't even leave me
Enough for the rent

You had total control
Over my choices
You took my soul
And held me hostage

Ransom, my life
Some reason I payed it
I lost to the drug
A slave to the fit

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ray Quesada 07 October 2012

Shane, i like this. I have dealt with substance abuse issues my whole life. great relatable topic for many i am sure. if i were you, i would revise this and make it better. just my opinion. pleaase feel free to check out some of my poems, let me know what you think! _RQ

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