Grandpa's Lecture On Love Poem by Sase vardhni

Grandpa's Lecture On Love

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Once I asked my Grandpa,
When can a person fall in love?
He laughed and gave a lecture
A lecture considering future
His lesson was in vernacular.
All I did was just jotted down
Certain highlighted quotes
Translated them into English language
I object certain points of his
I converted them into a poem.

The poem begins in this way
The way in which we may
We may agree to lay.

Love is 'the pure feel'
The dart that is felt by looks
Boards with likes
Sustains with a little lust
As long a fertility sustains
Continues with mock fights
Lives with silly numerous apologizes
Departs with spirituals
May later live as individuals

Thou fall in love
When you are qualified.
Make sure, that your beloved
Is qualified too
Who owns a character for you.

Dated: 10.10.2014

Monday, September 25, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: advice,love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This advice was given from his perspective. Thus the generation gap is clear. He even uttered certain experiences.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rini Shibu 26 September 2017

Your grandpa gave wonderful definition for love

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Sochukwu Ivye 21 October 2017

Great piece. Clear and profound. Keep it up, poetess.

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Chinedu Dike 20 October 2017

Charming and insightful piece on love, lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing Sase and do remain blessed.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 18 October 2017

Grandpa was so humorous and sharp witted? You are lucky dear, for having one such great soul as a Grandpa. I felt envious. Quoting the lines I loved.. Boards with likes Sustains with a little lust As long a fertility sustains Continues with mock fights Lives with silly numerous apologizes 10 for it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 18 October 2017

A very farsighted recommendation by grandpa for his lovely little grand kid. Loved his words.. Thou fall in love When you are qualified. Make sure, that your beloved Is qualified too Who owns a character for you. 10+++ for it.

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Sase Vardhni 18 October 2017

Awe so sweet. Its nice to read this cute comment. Thankyou Subhas :)

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Rajnish Manga 26 September 2017

We can draw our own inferences from what according to you is your grandpa's advice about when a person can fall in love. Thank you, Sase.

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