Grapes Of Wrath Poem by Herbert Nehrlich

Grapes Of Wrath



The grapes of Wrath fell in the bath
and sank right to the bottom,
he fished one out from under Kath
committing an erratum.

Drawn from a magnet to the patch
where moss grows wild and freely
his hand got drawn into a snatch
and all was touchy-feely.

Who thought that grapes would disappear
inside a tub of bubbles
he let her have a sip of beer
which added to his troubles.

She lectured him, my dear old man
you may not know the reason
I share the bath with Maryanne
and grapes are out of season.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vincent James Turner 15 July 2008

if I could write poems that rhyme and have a great rhythmic beat to them I would want to write like you, often I read your work but do not comment as sometimes I feel a little out of my depth when it comes to your style however I have consumed much coffee today and have received a pat on the back from my boss so hey why not. I particularly liked the third stanza, as two of my favourite things are bubble- I am a West Ham Fan, and Beer! regardo Vincent

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Vincent James Turner 15 July 2008

if I could write poems that rhyme and have a great rhythmic beat to them I would want to write like you, often I read your work but do not comment as sometimes I feel a little out of my depth when it comes to your style however I have consumed much coffee today and have received a pat on the back from my boss so hey why not. I particularly liked the third stanza, as two of my favourite things are bubble- I am a West Ham Fan, and Beer! regardo Vincent

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Vincent James Turner 15 July 2008

if I could write poems that rhyme and have a great rhythmic beat to them I would want to write like you, often I read your work but do not comment as sometimes I feel a little out of my depth when it comes to your style however I have consumed much coffee today and have received a pat on the back from my boss so hey why not. I particularly liked the third stanza, as two of my favourite things are bubble- I am a West Ham Fan, and Beer! regardo Vincent

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