Grate, Great! Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

Grate, Great!

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Improved living standards.
More efficiently;
In the land,
With your works,
And, with the laws.
Classified! !
To undertake the works of peace;
Sustaining the status of life and,
Helping all with a positive standard of living in the land.
Grate, great!
With an impression;
Created with the muse of love,
Effectively and efficiently.

Thursday, May 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: lives
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mj Lemon 20 May 2015

This is a wonderful poem...There is something jarring about juxtaposing love and efficiency that makes this piece particularly thought provoking. Well done.

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