Saturday, February 23, 2008

Green Gods And Agnostic Readers Of Compost Comments

Rating: 4.1

Poet, having read your words; I wanted you to know
that I can see the trees you planted as I chop down
the hardest wood for my fires. I used the vacated
bird nests you guarded like a fanatic steward for kindling;
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Ted Sheridan
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Chris Mendros 03 March 2008

'...having considered your elitist and liberal metaphors; I find them... ...but another renewable/source of fuel...' -if truer words were ever spoken/written, i have yet to see them. 'Poet, green is no longer just the color of envy/but in has become the color of your gods…' -Oh, don't the truth hurt so good? 'And because I am forewarned, I am so forearmed with knowledge to defeat your poor examples and attempts at self expression.' -true, 'dat 'Poet, having gone into the wilderness; hugged the trees and bunnies you have still failed to silence the wind and blasphemous dissuader...' -even the green poet's wind is no match for that which occurs naturally, a gift from the one God it doesn't believe in. Another one for the favorites file.

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You know, sometimes I read your work and think that few others deserve the title 'poet'. t x

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