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Grubs And Disire

Rating: 4.8
LIGHTING struck the
ground you walk on,
LIKE a spear, it hits
a vein.IT bleeds, and
break the mussle of
love, from the inside,
only the inside.
THE out side is painted
up like a whore, working
the night, still there
is hope, so much hope,
when you take off your
clouths, and wash away
this sin....AMEN
Allan James Saywell 20 January 2006
when i read this poem it made me think about what a woman with a loose morality said to me way back in my past she said a quick wash will wipe away my guilt and i thought to myself will she wash her soul as well good write david regards AJS
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Michael Voorhis 20 January 2006
I like the poem, but it just seems like you capitalize the wrong words. Its completely up to you how you write your poetry, but when you capitalize a whole word, you are usually trying to put emphasis on it.The words 'like' or 'the' really dont need emphasis in my opinion. Nice poem anyway, Michael
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