Guess Who? ? Poem by Lakshmi Venkataraman
Guess Who? ?
My eyes met his
Mine portrayed fear
While his were clear
I ran towards him
He took me by my hands
And lifted me above the sands
From there all I could see was his face
They were full of grace
I was captivated by him
Neither the midnight moon
Nor the sun at noon
Radiated this grace
My confounded mind rested at peace
My fears were at ease
He made me feel bliss
Well! I was all his
Years rolled by
I grew to be him
My talks, My thoughts;
Were similar to his
For he being my FATHER
Who else will resemble him but ME! !
Lovely poem on your Dad Lakshmi...reminds me of my own father whom I loved and truly respected.10
I love how this poem kept you guessing on who the mystery man was.. really good poem. ~ Hazel G.E
A great write and a love poem about Dad. A 10. God Bless, Lynn
i just loved this poem, all daughters love their dad so much and your poem shows how much you love him..
ok good one.i also have similar feelings for my dad.dads are really special for daughters and you have expressed it well.
Very cute verse. Nice flow and choice of words which kept me guessing till the end.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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I very much liked this one very nice