Guiness Book Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

Guiness Book

Rating: 5.0


The blue bird is enamoured of blue sky
But doubtful rating will ruin the all poets....
For whom this marathon like last a beer glass
That to come in Guiness Book. But the word as
Blue bird, by the most sensitive sensors...

Wednesday, May 6, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: poets
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Pruchnicki 06 May 2009

Do you mean the Guiness Book of records? Are you comparing a poet to a bird? What's a 'doubtful rating'? Oh, now I see the bird perched on your fist! Some awkward phrasing, but overall an OK poem!

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Ency Bearis 06 May 2009

a meaningful write...nice...10

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