Saturday, May 1, 2010

Gulf Of Aden Comments

Rating: 4.0

We have been gone for 6 long months
We were told to go chase pirates off the coast of Africa
What we encountered was not what we expected, not what I expected
Young, very young individuals struggling for life
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Christian Marotte
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Kimberly Hilliker 07 November 2010

A sad yet provocative write, Christian. tragedies similiar to these go on all around us; yet, we remain quite. Good for you for exposing a horrific situation.

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Brandi Guthrie 15 May 2010

A well described window into your personal experience. Nicely done...keep writing.

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Matt Mooney 01 May 2010

Original and interesting subject.The emotions of anger and honest surprise come through clearly.

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