Shahin Latif


Gungun - Poem by Shahin Latif

My home is not a peace-place
Without you.
Peace for yours not for me
Home is only yours
Without me.

But
I will never live in home
without your lightning face.
You are my memory
Towards a new life

So
I will carry your memorable past
Deep in my heartiest heart.

Topic(s) of this poem: home, homeless, homesick

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Gungun by Shahin Latif

  • Bri Edwards (12/14/2015 11:23:00 AM)


    i would like to be able to make a bunch of English suggestions/comments. but i'm not always sure what you are trying to say (maybe others understand better than i do) AND it would be too time-comsuming. but if you have specific questions for me, please ask.

    i assume this has something to do with two people who have a memorable past together but are not together now.

    what is the meaning of the title? ? and check on the used of lightning.

    nice effort in using English! bri :)
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  • Shah Surja (12/3/2015 3:48:00 PM)


    'So
    I will carry your memorable past
    Deep in my heartiest heart'

    beautiful poem
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    Shahin Latif Shahin Latif (12/3/2015 4:21:00 PM)

    Heartiest thanks to your comment Shah Surja. May ALLAH bless you. Be well always.

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 3, 2015



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