Gungun Poem by Shahin Latif

Gungun

Rating: 4.8


My home is not a peace-place
Without you.
Peace for yours not for me
Home is only yours
Without me.

But
I will never live in home
without your lightning face.
You are my memory
Towards a new life

So
I will carry your memorable past
Deep in my heartiest heart.

Thursday, December 3, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: home,homeless,homesick
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 08 November 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Shahin. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Bri Edwards 14 December 2015

i would like to be able to make a bunch of English suggestions/comments. but i'm not always sure what you are trying to say (maybe others understand better than i do) AND it would be too time-comsuming. but if you have specific questions for me, please ask. i assume this has something to do with two people who have a memorable past together but are not together now. what is the meaning of the title? ? and check on the used of lightning. nice effort in using English! bri :)

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Shah Surja 03 December 2015

'So I will carry your memorable past Deep in my heartiest heart' beautiful poem

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Shahin Latif 03 December 2015

Heartiest thanks to your comment Shah Surja. May ALLAH bless you. Be well always.

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