H 048 Poem by Ari Alsio

H 048



time in my arms
be with me a long time
love with love

Sunday, October 25, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 25 October 2015

Wow lovely...love with love, great write Ari Alsio...

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Ari Alsio 25 October 2015

Thank you for a great all the lovely comments you. I am absolutely dumbfounded compliments. I'm trying to make a haiku 5-7-5 method, but the Finnish hyphenation is different from the English language. I do not know how to properly English, so do they with Finnish hyphenation. They become shorter sometimes, but I do not think harm so much as a whiff would have overflowed. Thank you again for all your comments like this at one time.

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