H 375 Poem by Ari Alsio

H 375

Rating: 5.0


the early birds
eventually wake
the spring to our nest

Thursday, November 5, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 05 November 2015

Wow nicely thought...To me early bird catches the prey....late risers get only trail....Loved it Mr. Ari.

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Ari Alsio 05 November 2015

The same early birds who eat the worm, if they like to put the nest ready. Thanks M A N

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 November 2015

The early birds speak new stories. Interesting sharing. Nice motive and flow to express thought.10

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Ari Alsio 05 November 2015

Renewal is the present day, but keep the traditional stick as possible. Thank you.

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