Ari Alsio

H 375 - Poem by Ari Alsio

the early birds
eventually wake
the spring to our nest

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Haiku

Comments about H 375 by Ari Alsio

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/5/2015 8:49:00 AM)

    Wow nicely thought...To me early bird catches the prey....late risers get only trail....Loved it Mr. Ari. (Report) Reply

    Ari Alsio (11/5/2015 11:17:00 AM)

    The same early birds who eat the worm, if they like to put the nest ready. Thanks M A N

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/5/2015 8:15:00 AM)

    The early birds speak new stories. Interesting sharing. Nice motive and flow to express thought.10 (Report) Reply

    Ari Alsio (11/5/2015 11:20:00 AM)

    Renewal is the present day, but keep the traditional stick as possible. Thank you.

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 5, 2015

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