Haiku 108 (Sleep& Death) Poem by Prabir Gayen

Haiku 108 (Sleep& Death)

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Haiku 108
(Sleep& death)
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Sleep is beautiful
In it there is death inside,
Death nourishes life.
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Wednesday, January 23, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Srijita Mondal 23 January 2019

Without Death Life is not possible 😁😀 Without Life Death is not possible 🤣😂

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Srijita Mondal 23 January 2019

In Sleep we repose in our SELF..it gives us the vital force of our life..stress eliminates, pain dicreases, body relaxes, wheel of mind stops for some time and we get the needed strength, new energy for living.. Death nourishes Life

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Srijita Mondal 23 January 2019

Deep Sleep, Meditation, Deep Love are synonymous..all has Death inside..they all bring Death..we are lost into Nothingness..

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Srijita Mondal 24 January 2019

All have death inside

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Bri Edwards 23 January 2019

Sleep is beautiful /i AGREE, ....if it is peaceful In it there is death inside, /i say using In it AND inside together is redundant; forget haiku! Death nourishes life /perhaps the death of some body cells during sleep has a nourishing effect bri :)

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Srijita Mondal 24 January 2019

It is poetry..often poets have their own choice to break the rules for the sake of poetry: to emphasise, to exaggerate, for ornamentation etc... Poetry is a river that flows only at it's own sweet will

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