Haiku-13(Heaven) Poem by Saheb Mohapatra

Haiku-13(Heaven)

Rating: 5.0


Land glittering in moon's shadow,
With creeks gearing up to "mortal tract";
Angels singing in God's praise.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
* Sunprincess * 13 August 2015

........beautiful poem....incredible imagery ★

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Salini Nair 18 December 2014

Angels singing in God's praise.....good work...like it

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Rajnish Manga 13 December 2014

Very beautiful, nice poem and a perfect Haiku where the words create the magic of moonlight turning the earth into heaven. Thanks, Sir.

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Fabrizio Frosini 26 October 2015

It is a nice write, indeed, but unfortunately, Rajnish, it's not a 'perfect' haiku... it can't be called 'haiku'.. Please, Rajnish, read what rules a haiku has to respect (go to HAIKU SOCIETY OF AMERICA WEB SITE) Blessings

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