Haiku 149 (Cruelty) Poem by Prabir Gayen

Haiku 149 (Cruelty)

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Haiku 149
(Cruelty)
Humanity bleeds hard,
Inhumane volpones gather,
Pious should volplane.
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Saturday, February 16, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 17 February 2019

May be humanity breeds sly foxes. But had my son not been a fighter pilot, I would not have understood your volplane. You're right, perhaps we are diving down as a human race. Your Haiku perhaps dives too deep down! ! ! Let us hope for the better.

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Gajanan Mishra 17 February 2019

Humanity bleeds hard, great write, made us cry

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Aniruddha Pathak 17 February 2019

Yes, you are perhaps right.: Man is more and more turning into a 'sly fox'. But had my son not been a fighter pilot, I would not have understood volplane. So, may be you are again right that humanity is diving deeply down. Thank you Prabir for sharing this subtle Haiku.

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Aniruddha Pathak 17 February 2019

Anything wrong PH? The feedback is not taken?

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Mahtab Bangalee 18 February 2019

excellent -Pious should volplane

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Meethi Mondal 17 February 2019

Let Us Stand Unite, Domestic fight should be freeze, Melt into patriam...

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Srijita Mondal 17 February 2019

" Humanity bleeds hard" Very realistic line 🇮🇳❤️🇮🇳

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Srijita Mondal 17 February 2019

These kinds of poetries are very much needed in this painful time 🇮🇳

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Srijita Mondal 17 February 2019

" Humanity bleeds hard, Inhumane volpones gather, Pious should volplane" Pious should volplane..great line 🇮🇳

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