Lillian Susan Thomas

Haiku #22 - Poem by Lillian Susan Thomas

stones echo
in the bell tower's shadow:
sunset Angelus

Comments about Haiku #22 by Lillian Susan Thomas

  • Susan Jarvis (6/14/2009 4:54:00 AM)

    The bold image of the first line gives way to the spiritual stirrings of the second line. The soft whisperings of sibilance; 'Angelus echoes on stones', compliment the 'shadow' beautifully. A visual and emotional journey in just two lines - pure genius! S :) (Report) Reply

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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (6/9/2009 1:05:00 PM)

    Nicely observed and beautifully crafted. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 9, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, September 11, 2009

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