Haiku #19 Poem by Lillian Susan Thomas

Haiku #19



bats swarm from buildings'
roofs while pigeons roost same place:
where's traffic control?

Friday, May 29, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: buildings
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Gieske 12 June 2009

Lillian, I think this would turn out better if you dropp some of the words: bats swarm where pigeons roost where's traffic control? Ben

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Ashraful Musaddeq 29 May 2009

Very cute and interesting 10+

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