Haiku 226 Poem by Ari Alsio

Haiku 226

Rating: 4.0


the same time
one full moon to the next
elapses between

Wednesday, October 21, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 29 October 2015

time elapses... the same. a great observation. thank you dear poet. tony

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Billy Loving 21 October 2015

very well expressed - enjoyed

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Ari Alsio 22 October 2015

Thanks Billy!

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M Asim Nehal 21 October 2015

Superb, Very well thought haiku, Loved it.

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Ari Alsio 22 October 2015

The compacted pack, the more discretion requires, it is true. Thank you dear friend.

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