Haiku 256 Poem by Ari Alsio

Haiku 256



a spring frost in March
every morning to wait
life will live

Sunday, October 25, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 25 October 2015

Nice one, shorter than haiku.......In haiku syllable is 5-7-5 yours is 5-6-3 nevertheless it was wonderful.

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