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*haiku #28

Rating: 3.1

muslin canopy
ripples above her:
she dreams

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written 06/10/2009
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Ben Gieske 11 October 2009

ripples and dreams go nicely together

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Indeed a jocund Topi. Enjoyed much ten dr.sakti Cordially invite to read and comment on my poems. ds

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Ashraful Musaddeq 18 June 2009

Dreamy----- 10+++

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Bullion Grey 18 June 2009

Really invokes deepness, I like it.... BG

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