Haiku 281 Poem by Ari Alsio

Haiku 281

Rating: 5.0


she will be water
or the highly flammable
the ground is love

Wednesday, October 28, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 28 October 2015

Water or the Inflammable. nice contrast and the reason is love. i smiled when i read your poem thank you dear poet

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Ari Alsio 28 October 2015

I tried to try to replace the water with milk are other options, but the water was the best of all. Thank you dear Dr. Tony

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M Asim Nehal 28 October 2015

Wonderful, Magic of love indeed...10

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Ari Alsio 28 October 2015

Thanks M A N

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