Haiku 3 Poem by Sean Williams

Haiku 3



Summer faded fast
Everlasting autumn passed
Into long winter

Friday, March 26, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn,haiku,summer,winter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lesley Merrin 01 April 2010

this poem made me feel sad as if there is some underlying meaning to fast fading summer. A true poet Sean who can evoke these feelings in readers with just a few words. Can't wait for your next.

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Kim Davies 30 March 2010

This is quite lovely just as it is, yet I feel there is so much more bubbling under the surface - potential to extend this into a longer poem me thinks? ; -)

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Kim Davies 30 March 2010

This is quite lovely just as it is but I can feel all kind of things bubbling under the surface - potential for a longer poem me thinks? ; -)

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