Drift
Through that bitter, silver ice mist
A tight, tacking turn and the wind bites and burns; a shift away from the centre
Sail across the gulf stream into the great wide open and radio silence
This vessel is so fragile
Lashed by repetition, cracked by sea devils
Grey shapes thick as thieves with this stealthy night
There is so much sky
So much scope for identifying new stars
A seafarer with an unreliable sextant from long ago
What a wonderful first poem. It will leave a deep impression on anyone who reads it. You make good use of simile, metaphor, personification and alliteration without it being manufactored. To me it is a subtle metaphor for life and what life throws at you and yet you go sailing on. You must keep writing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I like the scene you set and the course you sail. Very good poem.