Haiku 586 Poem by Ari Alsio

Haiku 586

Rating: 5.0


she wrote in spring
then she stroked the loose
old light blue suit

Monday, June 20, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 20 June 2016

Superb.......this is a fantastic senryu...I liked it 10...

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Ari Alsio 20 June 2016

A nice when you described, I like myself. Thank you!

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