Haiku Bats Poem by Eddie Roa

Haiku Bats

Rating: 5.0


Black bats at twilight
Circling in dizzying swirls
Emptying belfries

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gil Gregorio 08 February 2009

Hahahahaha...pretty bat....nice haiku.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 07 February 2009

OK! You can see what others cannot...........great poetic vision.

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Great write Eddie. I just imagine it all, the blackness, the circling and the belfries having a rest from their habitation....your picture with the limits of haiku is so vivid. Karin Anderson

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 06 February 2009

short sweet haiku.......... wonderful write..

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Eddie Roa

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Manila. Philippines
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