Black bats at twilight
Circling in dizzying swirls
Emptying belfries
OK! You can see what others cannot...........great poetic vision.
Great write Eddie. I just imagine it all, the blackness, the circling and the belfries having a rest from their habitation....your picture with the limits of haiku is so vivid. Karin Anderson
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Hahahahaha...pretty bat....nice haiku.