Haiku Bridge Building Poem by Jonathan ROBIN

Haiku Bridge Building



Rhyme's self-destructive
when words become instruments
for minds constrictive

becomes addictive
when sight and sound, soul and sense
build bridge constructive.

Critic's injunctive,
vindictive, vanity finds
verse unpredictive,

'right rules' restrictive
recommends, write minds [g]rind
prose unproductive.

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(1 November 2006)
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