Haiku - Completely Inert Poem by Amitava Sur

Haiku - Completely Inert

Rating: 5.0


When my love is lacerated
The blow had congealed me and shut
Making me a clone, completely inert.
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Amitava (3.5.2015) 6-45 am


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Haiku - Completely Inert
Sunday, May 3, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 29 June 2015

Both profound and devastatingly sad. Through these few words you have expressed your grief in a unique way. Great Haiku, Amitava! Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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Geetha Jayakumar 04 May 2015

Wonderful Haiku. Beautiful pic you have uploaded. Loved reading it.

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