Haiku - Heart Torn Lover Poem by john tiong chunghoo

Haiku - Heart Torn Lover

Rating: 5.0


heart torn lover
a shredded fifty dollar note
in middle of street

Sunday, September 7, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chris Newlash 07 September 2008

i think the first two lines are off on syllables... but good peom

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john tiong chunghoo

john tiong chunghoo

Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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