john tiong chunghoo

Silver Star - 4,400 Points (Jan 21,1960 / Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia)

Haiku - Mickey Mouse Paperweight - Poem by john tiong chunghoo

sitting over
a billion dollar project
a mickey mouse paperweight

colourless day
children dawdle birds
over the white sky

Comments about Haiku - Mickey Mouse Paperweight by john tiong chunghoo

  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (8/23/2006 6:11:00 PM)

    John...You are quite the Craftsman grandeur in both Traditional & Contemporary Haiku Penning....I enjoy your style very much.I've dabbled a bit w/' KU myself, but it is most definitely not my strong-suit...Excellent job here''''''''''''''''''''''''''fjr (Report) Reply

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  • (8/23/2006 9:53:00 AM)

    I like the irony and contrasts in this, John It is excellent!

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 23, 2006

Poem Edited: Friday, August 27, 2010

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