Haiku - Mickey Mouse Paperweight Poem by john tiong chunghoo

Haiku - Mickey Mouse Paperweight

Rating: 2.8


sitting over
a billion dollar project
a mickey mouse paperweight

colourless day
children dawdle birds
over the white sky

Wednesday, August 23, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: birds,children
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 23 August 2006

John...You are quite the Craftsman grandeur in both Traditional & Contemporary Haiku Penning....I enjoy your style very much.I've dabbled a bit w/' KU myself, but it is most definitely not my strong-suit...Excellent job here''''''''''''''''''''''''''fjr

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Raynette Eitel 23 August 2006

I like the irony and contrasts in this, John It is excellent! Raynette

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Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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