*** Haiku Of Love *** Poem by ANJALI SINHA

*** Haiku Of Love ***

Rating: 4.1


Romantic rains falls
Sky leans on the earth to give
mouth watering kiss

Passionate rain pours
lovers earth and sky chatters
sounds pitter-patter

A monsoon wedding
Sky gives green sari as
a gift to darling earth

Anjali Sinha
03-01-2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shiblee Shahed 14 January 2009

.................. A monsoon wedding Sky gives green sari as a gift to darling earth these lines were really awesome....... i think u r so romantic in ur thoughts......... keep it up......... if u continue ur such writings i think i will be in love with u (who can say?) ...lol

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Sridhar RVL 13 January 2009

'Romantic, Thunders calling earth in to shying shivers: -) Green Sari: Supurb... lovely

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Ben Gieske 13 January 2009

Lots of color and sound with these to appreciate. I like the picture you portray in the first haiku. I like the idea of the sari in the third.

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Za Italian Buffon 13 January 2009

smooth words but alittle pit of a loose keep it up

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Sandra Fowler 11 January 2009

Rain is a wonderful metaphor for both love and music. Praise for your tuneful soul. Lovely work. Warm regards, Sandra

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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 16 September 2009

Nature infatuation and or mystic Ten+ dr. sakti

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Ashraful Musaddeq 01 June 2009

Lovely 10+++ Lucid Lucrative

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A successful combination of the magic geometry of poetry and the arithmetic of haiku. Best wishes with 10.

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The mouth watering kiss did it for me! Such vivid imagery in them all. You are a master poet Anjali. 10 Karin Anderson

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Ashraful Musaddeq 14 May 2009

Rain and nature in love. Beautiful,10+

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