Romantic rains falls
Sky leans on the earth to give
mouth watering kiss
Passionate rain pours
lovers earth and sky chatters
sounds pitter-patter
A monsoon wedding
Sky gives green sari as
a gift to darling earth
Anjali Sinha
03-01-2008
'Romantic, Thunders calling earth in to shying shivers: -) Green Sari: Supurb... lovely
Lots of color and sound with these to appreciate. I like the picture you portray in the first haiku. I like the idea of the sari in the third.
Rain is a wonderful metaphor for both love and music. Praise for your tuneful soul. Lovely work. Warm regards, Sandra
Nature infatuation and or mystic Ten+ dr. sakti
A successful combination of the magic geometry of poetry and the arithmetic of haiku. Best wishes with 10.
The mouth watering kiss did it for me! Such vivid imagery in them all. You are a master poet Anjali. 10 Karin Anderson
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
.................. A monsoon wedding Sky gives green sari as a gift to darling earth these lines were really awesome....... i think u r so romantic in ur thoughts......... keep it up......... if u continue ur such writings i think i will be in love with u (who can say?) ...lol