Saturday, July 4, 2009

** Love Letters On The Sands Of Time **-In Top 500

Rating: 4.3
From the blood of my heart
The words that I write
Each word that haemorrhaged
The chiseled groove of my heart did tell
my desires
Higher than the mountains
Deeper than the seas
Time will tell-it will tell

From the depths of my soul
The words that I scribble
Each word that catapulted fire
as sweat from my brow, like crystal beads
tell of my love
Greater than the sounds of thunder
Brighter than the flash of lightning
Time will tell -it will tell

From the ink of my sighs
The words fulminated
Each word that conjugated
Spelt with the fountains from my eyes
my passion does tell
On petaled papers of love
Enfolded and recounted
Not tossed to the storms
Or carried with the winds
Time will tell-it will tell


Dr Shrikant 24 August 2018
This is fantastic poem I like and dedicated to my sweet jadu
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Ranjit Ravindran 03 November 2009
Honest revelation of your depth of feelings. Liked the entities you choose for comparision. Superb Anjali. A sweet 10. Ranjit.
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Jeremy Peyton 23 September 2009
this is a fantastic poem! .........thank you for sharing.........10
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Rachel Butler 20 September 2009
Each word that conjugated Spelt with the fountains from my eyes Rachel Ann Butler
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Anand Madhukar 10 September 2009
A beautiful piece, outstanding...
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Himadari Jayasinghe 12 August 2009
Anjali, It's simply stunning.congrats! Im too busy to write a lengthy comment at the moment.But as soon as time permits me I'll do so.
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Ben Gieske 04 August 2009
Once, again, you use images very effectively to convey a meaningful picture. I like these: chiseled groove of my heart ink of my sighs fountains from my eyes petaled paper of love The time will tell-it will tell is very effective.
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Lillian Thomas 31 July 2009
You have flashes of brilliance in your imagery and your word choices. This is a very wonderful poem. The repetitions build a drum beat of the passage of time, reinforcing your meaning. Thank you for sharing.
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Sonya Florentino 29 July 2009
i love how this sounds like a folk ballad, the repetition makes it so musical!
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Anjali, first time I read your poem and I am mesmerized.It is fantastic.Deep-rooted emotion adorned with beatiful words.Hundred percent marks. Before my reading I find that it was already within top 500 poems.CONGRATS.
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