Haiku: The Sun Corrected Poem by A B Faniki

Haiku: The Sun Corrected

Rating: 5.0


The sun tans the skin
into beautiful brown color
and adds natural glow.

Wednesday, March 4, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: color,nature,sun
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In my haste 2 published my poetry book I uploaded a MS dat was nt edited it got a 3 star review.4 those dat bought it I have gotten d book edited & update it u can get it 4 free, the free promo will end today. Please leave a review if u could as a support for the poet. I have also corrected over twenty poem here I will get to the the rest that need corrections soon.Thank you for supporting a poem hunter poet. amazon com dp B084JH6H9Q
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mj Lemon 22 April 2020

Perfection! This haiku goes to myfavourites.

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Kostas Lagos 04 March 2020

Caught the moment of a sunny day! Perfect haiku!

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