Haiku-V Poem by Shreej k.c

Haiku-V



grunting gravid cloud
crescent moon caresses
holds back her thick curls

Haiku-V
Thursday, May 12, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: cloud
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fabrizio Frosini 17 May 2016

''the epiphany''? that's a nice expression.. ;)

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Shreej K.c 17 May 2016

Yes, the Epiphany-how I imposed my humanly expressions over the supposedly simple and elegant haiku!

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Fabrizio Frosini 16 May 2016

grunting gravid cloud crescent moon caresses holds back her thick curls grunting gravid / caresses / her tick surls... - - no.. not really classical haiku.. ;)

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Shreej K.c 16 May 2016

Surely, not the classical one: -p it was written before the epiphany! !

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