Haikus - 13 Poem by Putholi Arumugham

Haikus - 13



Pureness deceives
pebbles in pond
still deeper

with small hops
sparrows come close
to the net

How pure it is
stealing whiteness from moon
Brook giggles

Midsummer noon
only smiling face
Sun's

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Reshma Ramesh 19 October 2008

i loved this one..........good write

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Sonny Rainshine 30 October 2007

Haiku ranks very high in my list of favorite forms. These are all interesting and beautiful, but I especially like your first one here. The lovely clarity of the clear, pristine water of a clean pond makes the pebbles appear closer than they really are.

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