Half of everything
Still absolutely nothing
Story of a life
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A life in fraction is a portrait of loss. A brilliant write! Deeply dark and very thought provoking poem
But does the filling matter? If full but not healthy....you have stirred up some interesting thoughts. Thanks foor reading, Richard.
We all work so hard to achieve what we can, and it always feels like its never enough, for me it feels like every step I take is one two steps back. This poem feels like that. To my favorites
Thank you, Kevin. And you have raised a fascinating issue. Can we (and I know we do) equate achievment with fulfillment?