Hang On! Poem by Seema Aarella

Hang On!

Rating: 3.3


(To the woman, mother, daughter, wife.....in me)

Endure this, just another thorn
Hard, sharp, unavoidable,
Just one more sting, in your bleeding
Bruised feet, few more steps and
The journey will end....please endure this!

Endure this, compromise is no shame,
Stripping your naive persona in the
Crowded halls of vanity, whipping
Your innocence by keen insults
Will end in a moment....please endure this!

Endure this, the agonizing sleep
On the bed of arrows, their tips
Will wane by abrasion of your bones
And there will be no more pain
During the long rest....please endure this!

Endure this, the burden of pledge
It's a noose around your neck
Yet don't tighten it, they need you
In blood and flesh, toil for them
Sweat and tears are the same....please endure this!

Endure this, till god moves,
Faith and tears will rock the heaven,
He will descend and confer justice
But when and how is an unknown fact
If you are true and pure by soul...please endure this!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saadat Tahir 16 July 2009

seema u have a very nice poem there in the style of the subdued femme of the subcontinent... strongly emotive and great message... check out my...cherchez la femme...when ever time permits cheers

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Raj Nandy 15 July 2009

It is very true that in our Indian society the women folks have to endure a lot! They form the backbone of the family and also provide the courage to others - 'to hang on', in times of crisis! 10+ -Raj Nandy

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Kesav Easwaran 13 July 2009

'...the agonizing sleep On the bed of arrows, their tips Will wane by abrasion of your bones And there will be no more pain During the long rest....please endure this! ' Good poetry there Seema...tone subdued but emotions strong and rich...thanks...10

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Rakesh Bedi 06 July 2009

Very True, Seema! So, please do endure....... and feel the choicest blessings being showered upon you from the skies. God Bless! ! !

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