Seema Aarella

Rookie - 10 Points (19 Mar 1979 / KGF, India)

! ...Dont Tell The World! (Sonnet) - Poem by Seema Aarella

This Sonnet is in the popular Petrarchan Form

I behold thy love as beautiful thing,
In my wrecked heart, a pleasure garden,
Thy revered love, a blooming Eden.
A daisy tuft seasoned by bright spring,
Surging in moments that defeats waiting,
I behold thy words as a jeweled crown,
On my worn pages of despicable frown.
And thy memory feeds my mind dying,
Daring couple disclose, but don’t you tell,
About memoirs many encased and kept,
Say not thy chronicle, sweet as daisy smell,
Buried, not unseen to thy eyes except
Reveal not, the guarded stash of our love,
Lest a rational world desires to know! ! !

IA NOTE: For those who find the format unfitting to a sonnet!

only 14 lines long— and has a firmly fixed form. The sonnet works best for expressing strong emotion or intense feeling, firm purpose, or great seriousness. This form works best if you want to focus attention on a single thing—a particular idea, situation, emotion, problem, observation, etc. —the sonnet gets to its point quickly and efficiently, with beauty and charm of form or expression.

The Shakespearean (or English) sonnet and the Petrarchan (or Italian) sonnet are the two most prevalent versions of this form today.
A Shakespearean sonnet or English sonnet is written in one stanza composed of three rhymed quatrains (each making one point in a three-step argument) , followed by a rhyming couplet that summarizes the argument
A Petrarchan sonnet or Italian sonnet is composed of an octet followed by a sestet with a variable rhyme scheme. The octet presents the poem’s theme or problem, while the sestet offers a change or a resolution. In its traditional form, this sonnet never ends in a couplet.
Robert Frost was popular at Petrarchan form of sonnets.
sonnet’s formal requirements (14 lines of iambic pentameter with a specific rhyme scheme) , method (a strong focus on one subject) , and goals (persuasion, surprise, balance) ,
Ref: of poetic expressions.

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Comments about ! ...Dont Tell The World! (Sonnet) by Seema Aarella

  • Ranjan Kumar Ghosh (10/28/2017 10:08:00 PM)

    form of sonnets.
    sonnet’s formal requirements (14 lines 10++++++++3
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  • Seema Jayaraman (9/9/2015 5:53:00 AM)

    so strong written, so much to learn...interesting the technicalities (Report) Reply

  • Reyvrex Questor Reyes (6/22/2013 6:05:00 AM)

    It's nice to know another sonnet lover. I write mostly on the Shakespearean format. You did well on your poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (12/8/2012 9:02:00 AM)

    well crafted poem. acknowledged (Report) Reply

  • (1/11/2009 7:12:00 AM)

    a lovely sonnet seema
    nicely penned
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  • (1/10/2009 2:44:00 AM)

    And thy memory feeds my mind dying,
    Daring couple disclose, but don’t you tell,

    I must say Seema, you are a very skillful writer of poetry... I am impressed and amazed to read this lovely sonnet... You have told us everything, yet saying don't tell the world... Great piece, well done... Surely proud of you...
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  • (1/1/2009 8:22:00 AM)

    lovely sonnet seema..............excellent............very well penned (Report) Reply

  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (12/31/2008 8:54:00 AM)

    no can beat you in using new words and aptly. good.
    Reveal not, the guarded stash of love,
    Lest a rational world desires to know! ! !
    what do you mean from these two lines: , if the shoud know or not?
    ths last line seem mis matching.
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  • (12/30/2008 9:20:00 PM)

    Read your poem Don't Tell The World, very good theme and well expressed sentiments in sincere form, One critical observation if I may take the liberty of making, [I hope it is alright if not doon't read further[ Sonnet has a form and style 14 lines either three, four line stanza and the last two lines summarizing the prior theme written each line in either ten or eleven syllables, Shakesphere or the alternative form of sonnet where it is divided six line six lines hard it may seem find you will easy for a talented poet like you, please reply .......... (Report) Reply

  • (12/30/2008 8:19:00 PM)

    lovely words revealing the well guarded 'stash of love'...forget the rational world for the is not for them anyway! good love poem...10 (Report) Reply

  • (12/30/2008 10:32:00 AM)

    You have rightly called it a sonnet! It can be put to music and sung!
    -Raj Nandy
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  • (12/30/2008 8:57:00 AM)

    don't you's beyond the grasp of the rational world any way! (Report) Reply

  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (12/30/2008 5:55:00 AM)

    Beautiful piece, its time to tell the world about your great love.Thanks Seema. (Report) Reply

  • (12/30/2008 4:26:00 AM)

    a touching sonnet- you are right love is beyond rational mind.

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  • Sathyanarayana M V S (12/30/2008 3:33:00 AM)

    Really this poem has brought in some yesteryear fragrances of a sonnet. Beautiful; memorable poem indeed. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 30, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, January 2, 2009

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