Saturday, October 16, 2010

Happy Hampton Beach+ Traditional Family* Beach By Gayle M. Honora Sweeney Comments

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Smooth like a slice of banana the sun
Slipped through the summer sky
Tossing white sail boats on the deep,
Emerald blue sea floated by.
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Stephen W 28 April 2014

A fine day out! I suggest that it's a bit long to have as a single stanza. I find it easier to read poems that are divided up into stanzas, just as prose is better with paragraphs. It makes it easier for the eye to keep track of where I am.

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