Tuesday, October 22, 2019

Harsh Desert Comments

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It's a harsh and unpleasant desert,
The travellers have travelled a long distance,
They are weary and frustrated now,
As they think an oasis is never possible in it,
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Valsa George 24 October 2019

This poem teaches that one should never get dispirited in the face of obstacles. Also one single person with optimism and hope can inspire and enliven many! A very meaningful write!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 October 2019

A wonderful and inspiring poem full of hope. A well conveyed write.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 22 October 2019

glad they had a leader who had good followers bright AAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 October 2019

An excellent poem! The two lines I Liked most are: " With his optimistic soul he firmly believes that An excellent oasis is surely waiting for them in the near future" . Well penned......10

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