hatred invades me slowly Poem by Domnica Drumea

hatred invades me slowly

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hatred invades me slowly

like a room full of water


with the slowness of an inquisitor

the october sun cuts strips off me


I lay traps for myself

the satisfaction of skin well stitched


I've waited patiently

for the disaster to happen

and it happened


I am a crow with eyes gouged out

I peck at myself mercilessly

Saturday, May 19, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: october
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 19 May 2018

Well conceived and elegantly crafted in persuasive poetic expressions with conviction. A good depiction of the self destructive effects of hatred written with clarity of thought and mind. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Domnica.

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