janani ashwin


Have A Little - Poem by janani ashwin

Have a little mercy
On this troubled heart
A kind of forbearing
To give a fine start
Her bold moves on head she bears firm
Understands her own to handle in term

Have a little kindness
For it is quite due
A soul in distress
May ask it anew
Her kind deeds in action she travels within
No kindness goes waste of that she is prim


Comments about Have A Little by janani ashwin

  • (12/29/2009 6:00:00 AM)


    hi

    this is indeed a smooth poem, rhymes giving it a nice song like feel. Simple words used with perfection to add depth to the meaning...connects well with life and experiences therein...good one...read my poem called ' LET HER NOT SACRIFICE ANYMORE'
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  • (12/18/2009 7:24:00 PM)


    a wonderful poem...yes a distressed soul needs a kind caress...in your poem rhyme and emotion flow beautifully well....read my 'am not just a drop' page 1 (Report) Reply

  • (12/17/2009 9:23:00 PM)


    heartfelt pleading good poetic...deserves a lot more than 'a little'! ...i liked the expression 'anew' there...it hides a lot of emotions inside...10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 16, 2009



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