janani ashwin


Deity - Poem by janani ashwin

Precious in the heart of the one she admires
Fine is the quality of her subdued offerings
Some words as she gently touches his thoughts
Awake in sleep and deep unto his being

Unravelling the mysteries of her own consciousness
She revels in the splendour of her soul's longing
To be understood and owned responsibly
Cared with concern as shared with surrender

Blended with the purity of flowering fresh thoughts
She brightens up to another special day
Filled with the lulled tunes of her singing heart
She wakens up the the altar of hopeful solitude


Comments about Deity by janani ashwin

  • (12/26/2009 10:17:00 PM)


    what we pray for is more important than who we pray to..... (Report) Reply

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  • (12/24/2009 7:34:00 PM)


    a lovely poem...the tender romantic devotion of an indian woman...wonderfully conveyed (Report) Reply

  • (12/20/2009 2:12:00 AM)


    a poem devotionally romantic, Janani...your deity must have accepted your devoted offerings...no doubt indeed...10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 18, 2009



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