Have you ever hidden a treasure?
A belonging too valuable to measure.
You put it in a place that was remote.
There are no traces in a written note.
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A very beautiful poem delicately composed. It floes so gently. A mind-awakening thought. How many thoughts have been ours only to be forgotten and never recalled or shared. I wonder if they will ever be able to be retrieved like a deleted file on a computer. Makes me think of those who are now recording their every minute and move with cameras and saving the pictures. But wouldn't we become overwhelmed? Ben
I liked this poem. You have beuatifully narrated that hiding a treasure could mean losing it for ever.