Hunny Bee

Rookie (26/01/1987 / Kuwait)

He Knows Somethin Is Wrong - Poem by Hunny Bee

I closed my eyes, , and started to think of her, , is she still smiling down at me

I close my eyes and started to think of him, , is he still thinkin of me

i remembered how we used to sit in places where she didnt want to, ,
she never said anything not because of her desires but mine
she use to smile, that smile.. made everything so simple.. so wonderful,
soo beautiful

I remembered how we used to talk for hours, just foolin 'round making storiez
he used to make me smile, from deep inside, he made everything so simple,
so wonderfull, soo beautiful

but now everything seems like, , a memory in my heart, , which i will chrish, ,
hope that her memories dont turn into dust, , hoping, , to see her smile just once more, , before, ,

but now it seems like, he's way too far, , we're miles apart
hope he knows what he really meant to me, hoping, , to look into his eyes just once more, ,

as i walk alone, towards the darkness.. i remebered how dark her hair use to be..
and how she use to tell me to never go there..
i hear her voice.. is it really her?
is she really with me?

as I walk along headin to the sweeter end, I remembered his sweet words
and how he used to say 'it's gonna be ok'
I hear his voice.. I look around me
but he's not there!

its getting heavey.. i cant move my legs anymore, , will i die here..
will i see her again.. just once! just once more
i want her pic in graved in my heart.. i lost a part of myself.. its to painful..

its getting cold.. I can't feel him anymore, should I wait here..
will he come back, , just once! just once more
I want his hand to touch my heart.. I left a part of myself with you, i know it's safe..

we might not reach each other.. we might not see each other..
but my mind and soull will always be with her.. forever, ,

we might not find each other.. we might not hold each other, ,
but my heart and my all will always be with him.. forever, ,


Comments about He Knows Somethin Is Wrong by Hunny Bee

  • (6/21/2008 8:05:00 AM)


    Luv the poem alot ;)

    u and ur friend, u should be write more; p
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  • (1/26/2007 7:55:00 AM)


    About, the poem...I liked it. It shows confusion about who the heart lies with. Anyway, a while back you left a comment on my poem 'Denial.' ((I think it was)) and you said 'Dont worry, it gets easier when somewhere out of the blue some one new comes along.' I just wanted to let you know you were right and I appriciate it.
    ~Amber.
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 9, 2006

Poem Edited: Friday, July 23, 2010


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