Ouch! Poem by Hunny Bee

Ouch!

Rating: 5.0


so long ago in time
I promised myself never to cry out of pain
at least not for anyother human being
I said my tears were to stay for me
thought hurt wasn't worth a tear!
nothin really mattered over those years

then you happened to me
like nothing else I feel
I believed in you
I smiled for you
of all the people I knew
I thought I knew you

you looked into my eyes
I saw the whole world stand by
for once in my life I didn't want to die
and now with a histaric smile
I say, I just never...
never thought you'd make me cry! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yinniy Walakinniy 21 June 2008

it happened for me once, so hurts, i mean am a guy, and a guy shouldnt cry, i mean i know that am strong and cant cry easily but with love anything is possible luv ur poem ;)

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Amber Green 08 January 2007

Wow, I know exactly what you mean in this poem. It's hard once you tear down your bariier for someone. Especially if they give you a reason to make it thicker.

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