Heart Poem by Angelo Turello

Heart

Rating: 4.5


Down
Down
Down
Through the open creaks
That left your heart so open
That left me falling down

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Schwartzinoff 31 December 2013

Unique! I love the... effect. :) Although I simple row of disappearing periods, they add depth. Check out my poems sometime!

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Marvin Brato 24 December 2013

Falling into love with and open heart is remarkable experience though painful!

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Heather Wilkins 20 July 2013

falling down is not easy. a painful write.

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Patricia Grantham 07 June 2013

Such a painful kind of love that can really leave you feeling sore. patch up the wound and go on. Good write. Many capabilities

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Adeline Foster 03 May 2013

It's a start! Looking for more. Read Mine - O Dearest Love - Adeline

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