Heart Of Glass Poem by Melissa Black

Heart Of Glass

Rating: 1.0


Don't tiptoe around me 'cause
my heart is made of glass.
Don't fight to finish,
fight to last.
I don't want you if you aren't true;
my heart couldn't take it if it knew the truth.
You stole my heart,
now I want it back.
You wanted me to leave
and never come back.
I'm trying to go but I feel
I'm missing something important,
but now it's stolen and dormant.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paige Nielsen 09 May 2009

Okay, the message of this poem is loud, clear, and beautiful. I really like the line 'don't fight to finish/fight to last.' That is deep, girlfriend. The last line, though, is rhythmically a little awkward. Also, I hate you because you can rhyme better than me. annnnd...kudos on the Blondie reference.

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